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== tl;dr ==
== tl;dr ==
[[Venith Crusland|Venith]] is bested by [[Flos]] again. [[Maresar Crusland|Maresar]] joins Flos without much debate. Many Flashbacks.
Venith is bested by Flos again. [[Maresar Crusland|Maresar]] joins Flos without much debate. Many Flashbacks.


== Summary ==
== Summary ==
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=== Flashback: ===
=== Flashback: ===
Venith thinks back to the 2nd time he and Flos had met. Venith rides away from his father's burning castle and the screaming village, as armed soldiers were killing them. His attempt to escape is then ruined by 16 black armor wearing riders. Before the leader could kill him, Flos arrives to save him. The leader then reveals that they are the Black Judgement, that they punish pathbreakers and criminals. And they have come for Venith's family, the house of Crusland, given that they have ''failed to honor their debts''. Flos isn't convinced by this argument, though, as ''paying their debts'' would have basically meant to sell their people as slaves. A young, frightened Gazi comes forth and reveals the enormous number of enemy soldiers, which vastly exceeds the number of Flos' army. The leader of the Black Judgement shouts that Flos has no right to interfere and they are following the law, which Venith's family have broken. The King of Reim ignores her, however, looks around and sees a dead child lying on the ground. After hearing from Venith the name of the girl, he raises his sword and says to his army that ''this'' is their reason, and charges towards the vast army.  
Venith thinks back to the 2nd time he and Flos had met. Venith rides away from his father's burning castle and the screaming village, as armed soldiers were killing them. His attempt to escape is then ruined by 16 black armor wearing riders. Before the leader could kill him, Flos arrives to save him. The leader then reveals that they are the Black Judgement that punish pathbreakers and criminals and have come for Venith's family, the house of Crusland, given that they have ''failed to honor their debts''. Flos isn't convinced by this argument, though, as ''paying their debts'' would have basically meant to sell their people as slaves. A young, frightened Gazi comes then forth and reveals the enormous number of enemy soldiers, which vastly exceeds the number of Flos' army. The leader of the Black Judgement shouts that Flos has no right to interfere and they are following the law, which Venith's family have broken. The King of Reim ignores her, however, looks around and sees a dead child lying on the ground. After hearing from Venith the name of the girl, he raises his sword and says to his army that ''this'' is their reason, and charges towards the vast army.  


=== Present Time: ===
=== Present Time: ===
Back in the village, Teres asks Flos the reason for Venith's hatred for him. Flos doesn't know if it was for abandoning him, for leaving the kingdom to rot, etc., but that he has to answer him. Trey tells him that he has just a single weapon, while Venith is wearing full plate armor. Flos replies that he would, indeed, prefer something else, but Venith will not wait and that a sword is all he needs. The twins keep trying to dissuade him from it, with no success though. With the two former friends now standing in front of each other in the duelling circle, Flos again asks him why he desires his death. Venith says that it is because ''he abandoned them'', and then runs towards Flos with a raised sword. Despite his vast improvements over the years, Venith is still no match for his former king.
Back in the village, Teres asks Flos the reason for Venith's hatred for him. Flso doesn't know if it was for abandoning him, for leaving the kingdom to rot, etc., but that he has to answer him. Trey tells him that he has just a single weapon, while Venith is wearing full plate armor. Flos replies that he would, indeed, prefer something else, but Venith will not wait and that a sword is all he needs. The twins keep trying to dissuade him from it, with no success though. With the two former friends now standing in front of each other in the duelling circle, Flos again asks him why he desires his death. Venith says that it is because ''he abandoned them'', and then runs towards Flos with a raised sword. Despite his vast improvements over the years, Venith is still no match for his former king. Right before Flos wants to give him the finishing blow, Venith's son, Calac, throws himself in front of his father and begs for mercy. Flos watches as villagers and soldiers pull Calac away with Teres and Trey standing by his side. Flos, then, turns his head, frowns, and pushed Trey off his feet. Trey then sees an arrow flying where his legs had been. Flos reveals that Venith's wifes is the archer, who is standing on on a hill thousand feet away. Teres is starting to panic because she sees that the wife is about to fire another arrow. Flos remains calm, knowing that Gazi is on the hill as well with a sword in hand. On the hill, the archers, Lady Maresar, lowers her bow after noticing the Half Gazer. Gazi manages to convince Maresar to stop attacking her king by saying that her lord hadn't come to kill her husband in the first place. She ends the conversation with threatening Gazi with killing her first if she is wrong.
 
dRight before Flos wants to give him the finishing blow, Venith's son, Calac, throws himself in front of his father and begs for mercy. Flos watches as villagers and soldiers pull Calac away with Teres and Trey standing by his side. Flos, then, turns his head, frowns, and pushed Trey off his feet. Trey then sees an arrow flying where his legs had been. Flos reveals that Venith's wifes is the archer, who is standing on on a hill thousand feet away. Teres is starting to panic because she sees that the wife is about to fire another arrow. Flos remains calm, knowing that Gazi is on the hill as well with a sword in hand. On the hill, the archers, Lady Maresar, lowers her bow after noticing the Half Gazer. Gazi manages to convince Maresar to stop attacking her king by saying that her lord hadn't come to kill her husband in the first place. She ends the conversation with threatening Gazi with killing her first if she is wrong.


Having regained his consciousness, Venith Crusland tells him, as he did in the past, to finish him off. Flos smiles, as his friend hadn't changed even after all these years, and tells him that he could never kill him. Flos asks his old friend one more time to join him, after Venith had again mentioned furiously how he abandoned them and he vowed in the past to kill Flos the next time he saw him.
Having regained his consciousness, Venith Crusland tells him, as he did in the past, to finish him off. Flos smiles, as his friend hadn't changed even after all these years, and tells him that he could never kill him. Flos asks his old friend one more time to join him, after Venith had again mentioned furiously how he abandoned them and he vowed in the past to kill Flos the next time he saw him.
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Venith takes Flos' hand, thinking that his old friend finally put his grudge aside, until Venith struck him in the face. Venith then rides away with his army, as he hasn't forgotten the day Flso turned his back on him.
Venith takes Flos' hand, thinking that his old friend finally put his grudge aside, until Venith struck him in the face. Venith then rides away with his army, as he hasn't forgotten the day Flso turned his back on him.


Having left the village, Venith meets his wife, who asks him if he is feeling better now after having struck his king. Unlike Venith, Maresar still recognizes Flos as her king. Venith is confused when his wife tells him that she will waits for him at Flos' side and he should hurry up and ''make peace with the past''. He calls for her but she doesn't look back. Maresar enters the village with a few of her soldiers greeting the king, who is overjoyed seeing her again. Gazi, who is also now standing beside her lord, mentions that Orthenon marches with an army towards the village, to Flos' dismay.
Having left the village, Venith meets his wife, who asks him if he is feeling better now after having struck his king. Unlike Venith, Maresar is still recognizing Flos as her king. Venith is confused when his wife tells him that she will waits for him at Flos' side and he should hurry up and ''make peace with the past''. He calls for her but she doesn't look back.
 
Trey sees Maresar entering the village with a few of her soldiers greeting the king, who is overjoyed seeing her again. Gazi, who is also now standing beside her lord, mentions that Orthenon marches with an army towards the village, to Flos' dismay.
 
Venith seeing Orthenon at the head of the army greets him, but Orthenon attacks him with his spear, making Venith fall down after having blocked it with his shield. Only, then, does Orthenon greet him calmly.


Venith, seeing Orthenon at the head of the army, greets him. Orthenon attacks him with his spear, making Venith fall down after having blocked it with his shield. Only, then, does Orthenon greet him calmly. Mars simply kicks Venith in the back, in passing. Shortly later, Flos meets Orthenon who begins to shout at Flos for being so reckless. Flos stops him and tells him to simply ''Take care of it'' ... ''Please.'' Orthenon smiles at Flos' order, as if remembering the past.
Shortly later, Flos meets Orthenon who begins to shout for begins so reckless. Flos then sees Mars in the distance and calls out to her if she had met Venith, which made Orthenon smile.


The chapter ends with Trey entering Flos's chambers with both of them talking about the events of the day and Trey's insecurities in the face of his sister's triumphs and abilities. Flos tells Trey of a secret that not even Gazi knows: Flos used to write poetry.
The chapter ends with Trey entering Flos's chambers with both of them talking about the events of the day.


== Characters ==
== Characters ==
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* [[Calac Crusland]] ''(First Appearance)''
* [[Calac Crusland]] ''(First Appearance)''
* [[Teresa Atwood]]
* [[Teresa Atwood]]
* Female Leader of the [[Black Judgment]]'' (First Appearance) (Flashback)''
* Female Leader of the Black Judgment'' (First Appearance) (Flashback)''
* [[Gazi Pathseeker]] ''(Flashback)''
* [[Gazi Pathseeker]] ''(Flashback)''
* [[Merisa]] ''(First Appearance) (Flashback)''
* Merisa ''(First Appearance) (Flashback)''
* [[Maresar Crusland]] ''(First Appearance)''
* [[Maresar Crusland]] ''(First Appearance)''
* [[Queravia]] ''(Mentioned)''
* [[Queravia]] ''(Mentioned)''
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== Locations ==
== Locations ==
* [[Manimar]]
* Manimar
* Venith's Village ''(Flashback)''
* Venith's Village ''(Flashback)''
* [[Reim]]
* [[Reim]]
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== Groups/Organisations Introduced ==
== Groups/Organisations Introduced ==
* [[Black Judgment]] ''(Flashback)''
* Black Judgment ''(Flashback)''
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